Thursday, October 30, 2014

Is Google Making us Stupid?

Main Claim : The amount of time and reasons we use the internet are causing a decrease in our critical thinking skills.

Types of evidence :

  • anecdotes
  • facts
  • examples
  • research


Rhetorical strategies(3) :

  • authority - uses authoritative sources for all facts and research
  • exemplification - gives examples of people that his main claim applies to
  • precedent - refers to historical examples



Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Rhetorical Strategies, Rifkin and Parry

In Rifkin's, "A Change of Heart about Animals", he discusses the inhumane treatment of "our fellow creatures". Rifkin uses the rhetorical strategy of pathos, giving sad stories about animals in captivity, making us sympathize with those animals and realize that they may deserve better treatment.

In Parry's, "Branding a Condition", he uses the rhetorical strategy of cause and effect to show the readers examples of how branding a disease or condition makes a huge difference in the pharmaceutical market.

Monday, October 27, 2014

Carey Essay Final

Carey Essay
For-profit universities such as University of Phoenix, Grand Canyon University, and DeVry University may be taking over the education system. For-profits are private universities with high tuitions that offer degrees in specific fields. They are run more like businesses than public and private non-profit universities. These colleges have been around for a long time, but recently their benefit to society has become controversial.  Debates are occurring between several educational experts on whether for-profit universities negatively or positively affect American students, tax-payers, and the economy. In 2010, multiple lawsuits were filed against certain for-profits for fraudulent activities. Many believe that these “colleges” are just big businesses scamming students and the U.S. government to increase profits. Others think that they are legitimate universities that provide a convenient way of obtaining a higher education to those often forgotten by the traditional non-profit universities. However, a lot of people, such as Kevin Carey, are on the fence about the subject and see both the good and bad in these universities.  Carey is the director of the Education Policy Program at New America and is widely considered an expert on education issues.  Carey has written many articles published in many magazines and newspapers, including the New York Times and is currently publishing a book about higher education in 2015. Most of his publications focus on higher education in the United States. In his article, “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profits?”, published in The Chronicle of Higher Education in 2010, Carey explains his views on the for-profits. He starts out by insisting that these colleges have become money-making machines that prey on less-fortunate people in order to get the tax-payers’ money in the form of government grants. However, Carey later goes on to argue that these schools aren’t all bad because they are a convenient way for the working person to get a higher education and may be no worse than non-profit schools. In this essay, I will dive further into the details of Carey’s claims and discuss other publications that challenge, complicate, and extend his arguments.
Carey starts out his argument with one of his overall claims, which is that the for-profit universities are just in it for the money and will do almost anything to increase their profits. He gives an example of Michael Clifford, the CEO of Grand Canyon University, one of the more egregious for-profits. Clifford, surprisingly, never even attended college and is now running one that enrolls tens of thousands of America’s college students. Many do not consider him as an expert on how to educate students, but he certainly knows how to run a business. Clifford has made millions of dollars, a majority of which comes from government funds, while running this college. Carey explains that “Entrepreneurs like Clifford, meanwhile, have been snapping up dying nonprofit colleges and quickly turning them into money-making machines”(Carey P 3).  For-profits are very profitable investments; they actually have large stocks in the market. Looking at Clifford and his luxurious house located on the beach in Southern California, it’s easy to see why people with business backgrounds are scooping up these opportunities and turning  failing non-profit universities into money making for-profit institutions. It doesn't seem as though these CEO’s are very concerned about providing people a legitimate education, as long as they make money during the process. This brings me to Carey’s next few claims.
Carey claims that recruiter’s aggressively target low-income kids who are eligible for government aid. The federal aid comes in the forms of Pell grants and unsubsidized student loans. He reports, “a quarter of all federal aid goes to for-profits, while they enroll only 10 percent of students”(Carey P 4). This seems to indicate that the college only wants certain people enrolled at their school so they can make more money. This isn't where it stops, though. After a few lawsuits in 2010 against for-profits on the count of fraudulent activity, the government sent undercover investigators to 15 for-profit schools. The GAO report states, “four of the 15 colleges we visited encouraged our undercover applicants to falsify their FAFSA in order to qualify for financial aid”(GAO report) and that at others the advisers gave false information on what you are required to report on the FAFSA application. This extends Carey’s claim by saying that they don’t just target low-income people, but convince people to lie to the government and report that they have less money than in actuality. But how does this get them more money?  If a person is able to go to school without having to pay out of their own pocket, they are much more likely to enroll and stay for longer, which brings the business/school more money. These actions demonstrate that these for-profits truly care more about money than about their students’ education because they convince them commit fraud, which is punishable by the court of law. The for-profits are encouraging students to break the law to increase profits for them. As long as these big businesses get their money, they could not care less about the risks people are taking to get these grants and scholarships. 
Carey’s next claim is that the for-profits don’t offer a legitimate or valuable degree. Most for-profits have regional accreditation just like non-profits. Accreditation is a process used to asses schools for quality and efforts toward improvement. Carey explains that “accreditation has become like a taxicab medallion, available for bidding on the open market”(Carey P 15).  This means that any college can buy it and we have no real standards to hold the for-profits to. Of course, any CEO of a for-profit would ensure you that their education is up to standard and that it’s a great school. However, Sarah Ann Schade complicates Carey’s argument by claiming that the for-profits don't offer up-to-standard courses on purpose, not just because they don't have the tools. Schade gives an example of the for-profit, Arizona Summit Law School, who “proposed curriculum changes that would reduce students’ ability to transfer to better law schools” and made “first-year classes incompatible with other law schools”(Schade 326). This further extends Carey’s main claim that they will do anything for money. This also makes it difficult for students to transfer, therefore they are stuck at the for-profit for a few more years if they hope to get a degree. For-profits aren't just simply incapable of offering standard classes, but the administration purposely offers sub-par classes just to trap students into paying tuition a few more times. This, again, shows that the for-profits do not care about the students well being, just the money.
Carey proceeds to argue that the for-profits need more government regulation. He asserts, “the federal government has every right to regulate the billions of taxpayer dollars it is pouring into the pockets of shareholders. The sooner abusive colleges are prevented from loading students with crushing debt in exchange for for low-value degrees, the better”(Carey P 11). Carey mentions one of the already existent regulations, the “90-10 rule” , which only allows 90 percent of the college’s money to come from aid under the Title IV.  However, the for-profits have found a loophole. The GI Bill, which is government aid for veterans, is not under Title IV.  Therefore, for-profits are able to get 100 percent of their money from government funds. Carey imposes that stricter and more regulations need to be made in order to prevent for-profits to find loopholes and continue their ways. Brian Darling challenges Carey’s proposal for more regulations. He says that the for-profits are under attack by biased bureaucrats “who are trying to make it hard for students to arm themselves with the education needed to find a job”(Darling). Darling suggests that the proposed regulations from the Obama administration unfairly hold for-profits to higher standards than non-profits. Traditional universities are not required to report statistics on graduation rates, loan defaults, or the ability to get jobs after graduation. A non-profit could have equally as bad statistics as a non-profit, but with these regulations, only the non-profit would have to report them and risk getting shut down. He explains that this would simply make the for-profits unable to operate rather than just fix their bad ways. Since for-profits are often the only option for minorities and people with full time jobs, if these regulations were put in legislation, thousands of potential students would not have any options for post-secondary education. 
Even though Carey spends a sufficient amount of time explaining corruption of for-profits, he goes on to claim that they aren’t actually “inherently evil”. In his second overall claim, Carey insists, “the reputable parts of the industry are at the forefront of much technological and organizational innovation”(Carey P 11). What he means is that the for-profits may be corrupt in their business activities to increase profits, but have educational aspects that are beneficial. The way they educate the students could revolutionize how education is done and help the United States get back on track to be one of the most educated countries. According to Carey, the for-profits allow more people to attend school and do, against popular belief, offer valid degrees.  
Carey claims that the for-profits are necessary to give minorities and people who work full-time the opportunity to get an education or training for a better job. He declares that for-profits serve “students that public and private nonprofit institutions too often ignore”(Carey P 11). Most for-profits have many campuses located near freeways, offer night classes, and have an online option for courses. They also usually offer degrees in more specified degrees, such as design or computer graphics, that the non-profits do not. For-profits also have been making deals with bankrupt community colleges and offering courses that they are unable to provide. Schade complicates this by claiming that even though it does let more people get more schooling, a majority of these people are unhappy with their education. She claims, “even if students manage to graduate from for-profit colleges, critics note that their graduates still are less likely to find their degrees to have been worth the expense and are less likely to secure employment compared to their peers at traditional public and private colleges”(Schade 328).  Yes, more people are getting degrees, but Schade argues that they aren't valid or worth it. As I mentioned before, she states that the for-profits classes can’t be transferred to the mainstream universities because they don't meet the standards and have different curriculums.  People with for-profit degrees usually have a difficult time finding employment in their field or make less money than their traditionally educated counterparts. Also, even if the student at a for-profit received the same instruction as someone from a traditional university, a bias still exists. For example, my father is a hiring manager at an engineering company and says that if someone applied for a job with a bachelor’s degree in engineering from ITT Tech, for example, he and his coworkers wouldn't consider him for an engineering job over someone with a degree from a traditional university.  
In conclusion, Carey makes many claims about whether or not for-profits are good or bad, however some of his claims are better than others. Carey gives multiple reasons as to why he believes that for-profits are corrupt and need more regulations. He supports these with statistics, examples, and analysis. However, when he argues the opposite and tries to prove that for-profits aren’t all that bad, his argument seems to weaken. He doesn’t provide much evidence or reasons as to why they are beneficial to have around. Rather, he states that there isn't proof that non-profits are any better. This is not a strong argument, because, in my opinion, although traditional non-profit schools may be just as corrupt as the targeted for-profits, the traditional higher educational university offers a balanced education and more opportunities to obtain future employment.


Monday, October 20, 2014

Carey Rough Draft

For-profit universities such as University of Phoenix, Grand Canyon University, and DeVry University may be taking over the education system. They have been around for a long time but recently it has become a huge controversy on whether or not this negatively or positively affects the students, tax-payers, and economy. In 2010, multiple lawsuits were held against certain for-profits for fraud. Many believe that these “colleges” are just big businesses scamming people to get government money. Others think that they are legitimate universities that provide a convenient education to those often forgotten by “normal” universities. However, a lot of people, such as Kevin Carey, are on the fence and see the good and bad in these for-profits.  Carey is the director of the Education Policy Program at New America and is widely considered an expert on education issues.  Carey has written many articles for the New York Times and many other magazines and is publishing a book in 2015. Most of his publications focus on higher education in the United States. In his article, “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profits?”, published in The Chronicle of Higher Education in 2010, Carey explains his views on the for-profits. He starts out by explaining how these colleges have become money-making machines that prey on less-fortunate people in order to get the tax-payers’ money in the form of government grants. Although, Carey later claims that these schools aren’t all bad because of the convenience of them, they just need more government regulations. In this essay, I will extend Carey’s claims that for-profits have issues but are not all bad by using other sources of the same topic.
Carey’s first claim is that the for-profits scam less-fortunate people who are unlikely to pay back their loans in order to get government money. He says, “most of that money comes from the federal government, in the form of Pell Grants and subsidized student loans”(Carey).  Supposedly, the recruiters send the students straight to the financial aid office where they are able to take out large loans with high interest. When these loans aren’t able to be paid back, the borrower, the college is still promised by the US government to get the money they are owed. This money comes right out of the taxpayers pockets. It doesn't matter if the student is able to pay the high price of the school or not, the school gets their money regardless. A government report extends Carey’s argument by showing that in addition to targeting to low-income people, many for-profits even commit fraud in order to get more money from the government. A report written about an undercover investigation of for-profits and discovered that many financial aid officers attempt to convince people to falsify their information on the FAFSA in order to qualify for a bigger Pell grant(“Excerpts from Government Accountability…”). This shows that these businesses are even willing to commit huge crimes in order to get more money rather than only aiming for people with low-incomes.
Carey claims that for-profits should have more government regulation. He says, “The federal government has every right to regulate the billions of taxpayer dollars it is pouring into the pockets of for-profit shareholders”(Carey). However, he doesn't go much further on the subject rather than his vague mention of the 90-10 rule. The 90-10 rule makes it so that the school can only get 90% of its revenue from government aid. However, these corporations have found a loop hole. The other 10% can come recruiting veterans and receiving government  money through the GI Bill. Pertreaus illustrates the possible outcomes of this lack of regulation with the example, “prior to the Military Lending Act of 2007, which capped the annual interest rate for some consumer loans to service members at 36 percent, they were victims of unchecked payday lending and other predatory financial services. I see a parallel in what is happening today with for-profit colleges”(Pertreaus). She is arguing that without more regulation on these companies, veterans will continue to be victims of these predators just searching for any money they can get. She goes on to say that “the benefits provided to our military and their families should not be wasted on programs that do not promote — and may even frustrate — their educational goals”(Pertreaus). She is extending Carey’s claim that the government needs more regulations to stop the exploitation of veterans for more money, by adding that they also need more regulations to make sure they are providing an actual education to those who want it.
Although Carey starts out by arguing the for-profits’ negatives, he goes on to argue that they aren't all bad. Carey claims that “for-profits exist in large part to fix educational market failures left by traditional institutions, and they profit by serving students that public and private nonprofit institutions too often ignore. “(Carey)  With the deteriorating economy, many people are going back to school for a college degree. However, most community colleges are not able to offer classes to all of the people who are trying to get an education. That’s where for-profits come in. With the option of online courses, it is possible to educate many more people than ever before. Also, the non-profit universities are much less convenient to a person who has to work full time and can’t make it to regular hour classes. For-profits usually offer online and night classes. Sieden extends this by showing how the for-profits are even helpful to the instructors. “For example, a student has at times introduced me to a new concept in my field that I have been able to explore and transfer to my own work situation. In many other instances, I have explained a concept to a student and then watched him or her actually put it into practice in the workplace — eventually describing the results to the rest of the class”(Seiden). We often only think about the students when thinking about the effects of for-profits. But there are also teachers who work other jobs or possibly don't have the right connections to become a public university professor. Tenure is not a thing at for-profits, making it possible to always have good instructors that are learning themselves as they teach. A group of working individuals can create an interesting atmosphere where almost everyone is able to apply lessons to real-life situations. 
Carey also claims that traditional colleges may be no better than these corporations, academic wise.Carey says that “traditional institutions have long resisted subjecting themselves to any objective measures of academic quality. They've pointed instead to regional accreditation, which conveniently allows colleges to decide for themselves whether they're doing a good job”(Carey). However, many for-profits also have regional accreditation which means degrees from for-profits may be just as legitimate as the ones from public or private non-profits. Darling extends this by saying that it would be unfair to regulate for-profits and not non-profits. He explains that the government is trying to make for-profits release all of their graduation and debt statistics. Darling explains how the non-profits don't have to release this information, so it would just seem like they are better schools when they might have the same job placement rates.

In conclusion, Carey claims that the for-profits aren't all bad, but could definitely use some reform and regulations. However, Pertreaus government reports, and Seiden, go into further detail with this. In my opinion, these for-profits are necessary to improve the economy because today an education is much needed to get a job. Many people are going back to school and need the convenience and specialty training that these colleges provide. If we can figure out how to make them more affordable, we could have a much larger group of educated and trained people and possibly improve the economy by creating more jobs.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Sources

Source 1: Brian Darling, “For-Profit Education Under Assault”

In this piece, Darling challenges Carey’s idea that the for-profits could use some more government regulation by arguing that the government only wants to unfairly regulate the for-profits and not the regular colleges because they have a prior hatred for them.

Source 2: David Deming, Claudia Goldin, and Lawrence Katz. “For-Profit Colleges” The Future Of Children. Vol. 23 / No. 1 / Spring 2013.

This piece challenges Carey by showing that the 90-10 rule is actually helpful to students and complicates the argument by showing how for-profits are helpful to the economy.

Source 3: Seiden


Seiden qualifies Carey's claim that the for-profits are too aggressive with their recruiting process by agreeing with it, but then going on to say that many people don't believe that they are ready for college and need to be convinced so that they can get an education that everybody deserves.

Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Extends,Complicates,Qualifies, Challenges or Illustrates

Seiden:

Seiden qualifies Carey's claim that the for-profits are too aggressive with their recruiting process by agreeing with it, but then going on to say that many people don't believe that they are ready for college and need to be convinced so that they can get an education that everybody deserves.

Perteaus:

Perteaus illustrates Carey's claim that the for-profits target veterans by explaining that the 90-10 rule  rule only allows 90% of the college's income to come from government aid under the Title IV. However, the GI Bill isn't under that Title so if they enroll veterans, the remaining 10% can still come  from the government

Conway:

"I can tell you that (personally) my experience with Ashford was very positive. I don’t feel that my Adviser lied to me in any way and everything that we discussed was point on, as far as my needs and expectations for furthering my education. With the exclusion of one course, my Instructors were knowledgeable,instructive, and interactive with the students and my main complaint with that course is that my instructor had a lot of personal emergencies and was unavailable a lot of the time" (Amy Dodson).

This quote challenges Carey's claim that the education is not up to the standards that the schools make it out to be.




Monday, October 6, 2014

Carey's Claims

Claims in the first half of the text(for-profits are the problem):

1. They lie about the amount of government money they are receiving.
            - Micheal CLifford contradicts this by saying that the college has any responsibility for how much students borrow or if they can pay it back.

2. They give people loans that they know they will default on.
            -They charge much more than non-profit public schools and will give a loan to almost anyone.

3. They target low income kids in order to get government money
            - For-profits educate 10% of the nation's college students but get 25% of the federal       aid(Statistics)

Claims in the second half of the text(publics are causing the problems):

1. Public  colleges don't have enough room
              -Community colleges are bankrupt and full so for-profits offer the classes that they don't.

2. Publics also lie about their education statistics.
            -Tom Harkin says that "we don't really know how many students graduate, get jobs, how they
               spend their federal dollar, and how many default over time" for public and non-profit   schools.

3. They aren't as convenient.
            - For-profits offer online and night classes for the many working people going back to school.



I would like to investigate further the way the government tries to regulate the for-profits and how they try and succeed or fail to get around it.

Thursday, October 2, 2014

Response to Carey

I think that Carey's overall argument is that the for-profit colleges are flawed in the way that they scam students, but are necessary for the growth of education in the United States. One of his claims is that for-profits purposely aim for low income students so that they can get federal aid. He supports this by stating the statistic that 25% of the federal student aid goes to for-profit colleges even though they only contain 10% of the college student in America. He also claims that the for-profits give out student loans to people who are very likely to default on them. Carey states that these colleges still make money because it is a law that the money from those loans are guaranteed by the government if defaulted. Another one of his claims is that despite their issues, these colleges are actually necessary. His explains this by showing that they offer convenient classes, cater to the students who are often ignored by the traditional universities, and help with the overwhelming amount of people going back to school that the traditional colleges can't fit. I was particularly persuaded that these colleges are actually useful because Carey gave many examples as to why they are. I think he could've given more statistics and examples of how they target kids and how they get so much money from the government.